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Post  PorcupineMan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:12 am

I guess your right. His ability doesn't seem very good, because it neutralizes the combat uses of nen, which would make most people very low level.
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:14 am

thats why I was reluctant to approve it

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Post  PorcupineMan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:17 am

Another problem is the user wouldn't practice nen, they would practice fighting.
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:19 am

yes well....

Admin-sama wrote:what happens when they absorb more than they can handle? what happens when they absorb a transformed aura or malevolent nen?

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Post  PorcupineMan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:25 am

Could they handle dead nen?
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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:46 am

when i said absorbed i didnt really mean it sent into his body and he could use it or anything, he more like a nen sink, nen just disappears when it touches him. he doesnt store the absorbed nen in his body. or anything. and should i let it affect hatsu nen or not? also if you can think of a way to achieve something similar that isnt as overpowered that would b efine two, this is just what i came up with im open to suggestion.

and i dont know what dead nen is... but im assuming they would just make it dissapear like any other nen
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Post  PorcupineMan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:50 am

I do have a suggestion, actually. He would be able to make bubbles (YAY BUBBLES) that can negate any nen that goes into the bubble, (of course there would be size limitation)
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:51 am

Bypassing the obvious question in rebuttal the basic abilitys arnt the sort of spechalised feilds that your treating them as. Oh and what if I am a transformation type and turn my nen in to flame nen? would the fire burn you? and what if I used nen but not to attack you directly

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:27 am

i like kaisers, lemme write up a thing for it, so i would be a materialization or transmutation user for bubbles that negated nen? or should i keep it a specialization?
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Post  PorcupineMan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:34 am

I think it would be emission, because your energy is being emitted into bubbles, and the bubbles "eat" others nen. Now you just need a condition. I strongly suggest not using your current one, because you would lose to most people.
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:56 am

use the diagram people! he cant have spechalisation and emotion, more importantly this should be transformation because you are changing the properties of your aura

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:00 am

i think specialization fits it becuse it is the absense of nen...

Given Nen type: Specialization
Secondary Nen type: Manipulation

Nen fields: Ten, Zetsu, Ren, In, Shu, En

Nen Ability: The user can create a bubble of space that breaks down nen. This is a bubble lined with nen, but the inside is the absence of nen. This bubble has a 3 foot radius and keeps the shape of a sphere. If it surrounds a person, then any aura emitted by the person is broken down, but a nen user can use zetsu/in to prevent their aura from being depleted. Any nen based attacks passing through the bubble are disintegrated, and any objects being affected by nen lose any effect on them when they enter the bubble. Attacks that move another personís nen, or destroy it, can change the bubbles shape or destroy it. The user is highly susceptible to normal physical damage while inside the bubble because they are not protected by an aura, and they are restricted to moving at the speed of the bubble to keep its benefits. Any weapon, such as a sword, whose strike is made stronger by enhancing the wielders muscles, will still have a full effect on the user even if it passes through the bubble. A weapon thrown through the bubble will lose any nen enhancements, but will not change its path and can still pass through the bubble.

Secondary nen abilities: The user can manipulate the bubble and move it in different directions. They can also change its shape. However, the bubble moves fairly slowly, it can move its diameter ever post (6 feet) in any direction, even under ground. It also takes a post to change the bubbleís shape; max length is 12 feet, with a 1.5 foot diameter.

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Bluís innate sense of avoiding being touched was based on an instinctive use of en with his nen aura. While in the bubble he looses this innate ability because he is not emitting an aura.
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:06 am

if matter passes through it then the movemnt through ground thing makes since, how would use of Gyo in the eyes effect the bubble? can it be seen with out Gyo, also is it breaking down aura that is relliesed or draining aura?

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Post  PorcupineMan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:07 am

That really isn't a harse condition, because of the fact that using en is very uncommon during the fight, making it a weak hatsu, (the harder the condition, the stronger the hatsu)
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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:21 am

that wasnt the condition, thats just what would normally happen, ill swear to a condition when i get my training.

it can be seen normally by any nen user because it is not being concealed by In

i done know what relliesed means...
and ive never heard of draining aura, but and aura in the bubble it broken down so i think it eould just break it down, if you talking about something like your rubber balls that steal aura, they could steal aura from the edge of the bubble making it smaller i guess.
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:33 am

my nen balls don't steal aura but what ever

I meant that if someone was inside the bubble in a normal state of ten would the bubble only break down what leaked out or would it suck more?

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:54 am

wait i thought they did, guess i read it wrong, anyways just imagine someone threw a ball that was ment to take a bit of the other persons aura, well you could hit the egde of the bubble and make it smaller, but if the ball entered the bubble it would loose its nen properties.

anything that exited the persons body would break down, they would not be using ten anymore but would be in a state of In. if they left their nen hole open then it would keep breaking down what leaked out. but it wont suck it out.
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:56 am

oh thats seems much more reasonale

we will approve it whaen the time comes

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:23 am

sweet! thank you kaiser for the idea.
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Post  PorcupineMan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:25 am

Your welcome, but call me SUPREME OVERLORD OF JUSTICE (That's my casual name, my work name is much longer)
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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:28 am

thank you SUPREME OVERLORD OF JUSTICE
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Post  PorcupineMan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:29 am

You are welcome... Whatever your name is. I am become Death Destroyer of WORLDS!!
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Post  Fwink on Thu Feb 05, 2009 12:24 pm

Added nen ability to char sheet
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Post  PorcupineMan on Thu Feb 05, 2009 12:25 pm

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Post  Fwink on Thu Feb 05, 2009 12:28 pm

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