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Name: Ray "Flash Thief" Grandaken

Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:13 pm

Name: Ray Grandaken Public name "Flash Thief
Age: 19
Gender: Male

Organization: Phantom Thief Kodai and his group
Position: Manual Lock expert

Specialty: Pick Pocketing and Lock Picking

Best physical characteristic: Hand Speed
Best Mental characteristic: Hand eye Coordination

Abilities summary (styles and experience levels, beginner, intermediate, moderate, advanced, advanced mastery, high master ECT.)
Hand to hand: Advanced
Weapons: Intermediate
Non combat: High Master

Techniques list (specialty moves, make sure to number and give a summary)
Hand to hand: “Flash Beat”
This style uses quick attacks to vital part of the body to bring down opponents. Popular points are the kidneys, sternum, Adams apple, eyes, chin, upper lip, nose, bottom rib. With his quick hands, it is also easy to redirect attacks.

The Kid: Ray jabs at the opponents kidneys with a four finger poke, this causes pain and can damage the kidneys if used enough.

Chop Adam: Ray chops the opponents Adams Apple. This causes their throat to tighten so they can’t breathe for a few seconds, it is also painful and the feeling stays for a while.

Plexy Sun: Ray hits the opponent’s solar plexus, or sternum, with the palm of his hand. This knocks the wind out of them for a little bit, and usually causes them to lean forwards. It also makes them feel like they are going to hurl.

Eye Poke U: Ray pokes the opponent in the eye, blinding them for a few seconds and causing them considerable pain.

Lips Up: Ray flicks the opponent in the upper lip. This involuntarily causes tears to flood the eyes because the upper lip has one of the highest concentrations of tactile nerves in the body.

Spare Ribs: Ray does a 3 finger poke under the opponent’s bottom ribs and pulls back, causing pain. This can also damage their ribs.

Weapons: Golf Balls. Ray carries a small bag of 10 Golf Balls that he uses to throw at enemies or other targets.

Golf Eggs: Ray throws a golf ball at the opponents head, causing a bump to form.

Golf Hole: Ray throws a golf ball at their body.

Non combat:
Pick Pocket: Ray is extremely adept at picking pockets. When taking a wallet he replaces it with a folded piece of newspaper, and reaching into purses is even easier.

Escape Artist: Ray has practiced the art of escapind binds such as handcuffs, nets and wire. He notices weaknesses in knots and knows how to slip his hands out of handcuffs.

Concealment: Any good thief must know how to hide, and Ray is a good thief. He can fit into small spaces to hide and knows how to disappear into the shadows or a crowd.

Silent Movement: Ray has specially designed shoes that minimize sound shile walking, and he also knows how to walk on the balls of his feet and absorb his steps with his ankles and knees to make his steps almost silent.

Lock Pick: Ray knows how to pick most conventional locks, and how to open an combination lock by the sounds of its inner mechanisms. However he has trouble with electronic locks and modern security technology.

Equipment:
Lock Picking tools: these are a set of thing, strong pieces of metal similar to small screwdrivers. They can be used to push up the pistons in conventional locks.
Golf Balls: he has a tube on either side of him with a spring in the bottom, each holds 5 golf balls. The tube is designed to make no noise and it beings the golf balls to the top when they can be easily reached.
Knife: 3 small switchblades with serrated edge for cutting things, not used in battle. One in his lower right pant leg (the ankle), one in his belt, and one in his left arm’s shirt cuff.

Appearance:
Height: 5’5
Weight: 132
Gender: Male
Eyes: Bright Yellow, they sparkle, especially when he’s happy.
Hair: Blonde and Spiky
Physical: Ray is short and has a lean body. He has skinny limbs which appear to have little muscle. However he is strong enough to lift his weight in awkward positions. He has tanned skin and many scars on his hands, especially the knuckles. Also each finger has a lightning bolt cut on the finger print part to interfere with his fingerprints. His face is innocent and friendly.
Clothes: Ray wears black pants with pockets down the sides. He also wears a black long-sleeved shirt that is tight fitting. This has pockets along the arms, and along the sides of the body. It has a hood on the back that is usually hanging down. He wears black fingerless gloves with a white lightning bolt on the top of the hand. He also wears his special noise reduction black shoes.

Personality: Ray is a kleptomaniac. He has an obsession with stealing. Even if he didn’t like it, he would be constantly tormented with thought of stealing. Luckily he also loves to steal things. Ray also is very particular and is a perfectionist. These two things give him characteristics of have obsessive compulsive disorder. If he does not do a job correctly, he will either start over, or kep working at it until it is perfect. If he is going to steal a sum of money, he will return half the money if he is only able to steal half, that way he can steal the whole bundle at a later date. He is normally a happy person and likes to talk. He is usually full of enery and while this is usually good, it also means he is always ready to steal. If he ever sees an opportunity to steal he will take it.

History: Ray grew up in a normal family. However his parents never gave him an allowance and rarely bought him what he wanted. They weren’t poor; they just didn’t want to spoil their kid. So he resorted to stealing to get what he wanted. He would steal money from people in the town to pay for candy and toys. When he didn’t have the money, he would simply steal the things he wanted. Eventually stealing became a pastime and he did it even when he didn’t really want anything. After a few years of this he could no longer resist going any significant period of time without stealing something. It became an obsession and a way of life for him. He amassed some money and bought a house, but was not content with it and bought another. He could never stay in his houses for long however and just left them as safe houses. He became extremely meticulous in his stealing, and made sure every job was perfect, down to the simplest pick pocket. Stealing was an art and a way of life for him. He sole to live and lived to steal. He spiraled further into his obsession as it took over his life completely. Now what he needed was a good friend or two to bring him out of his whole of thievery, to find something to do besides steal, for stealing was all he knew.

Given Nen type: Manipulation
Secondary Nen type: Emission

Nen fields:
Hatsu - Advanced
Ten - Poor
Zetsu - Advanced
Ren - Poor
En - Advanced
In - Advanced
Shu - Intermediate
Gyo - Poor

Nen Ability: The Thief’s Grasp
The user has a thin chain with a 4 lightning bolts acting like talons. He can use this to grab onto objects up to 20 feet away from him. Once an object is grabbed, it is impossible to remove the object from the chains grasp. The “Claw” is surrounded by a field of En. The En stays strong because the user’s secondary Nen type is Emission. This is used to detect objects the user cannot see.
Conditions: The chain cannot inflict any pain on a living being. It can grasp a hand for instance, but if the hand pulls away the chain cannot force it to stay if that would require inflicting pain. If it does inflict pain the chain goes limp and the claw releases its hold. The user must reel the chain in manually and pump his Nen directly into the claw to use it once more.


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Re: Name: Ray "Flash Thief" Grandaken

Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:20 pm

okay he seems reasnable

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oh and if hes not going to be a hunter please inculded the non hunter character info

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Re: Name: Ray "Flash Thief" Grandaken

Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:22 pm

ok, and i wasnt quite done yet anyways, still need attacks
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:46 pm

okay I put the infor you just added WHERE IT BELONGED and your position will be detumaned upon joining

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Re: Name: Ray "Flash Thief" Grandaken

Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:47 pm

ok i edited, and i dont know my position int he group yet...
sorry bout that, i clicked on the wrong one i guess
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Re: Name: Ray "Flash Thief" Grandaken

Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:48 pm

and on the sheet i got it belonged at the bottom so thats were i put it...
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:49 pm

no it said to include that info it didnt say there

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:51 pm

well the sheet i got had the char stuff at the top, then nen, then this

=========================== + Hunter ===========================

Status: ((hunter, one star, pro hunter ECT.))
Field: ((given hunter specialty))

License: ((include weather it is valid, where they keep it and it’s condition))

============================ + NON Hunter =======================

Origination:
Position:

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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:52 pm

those were is SPOILERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and it said to add them, if they belonged at the bottom why would I have gone to the trouble of coding the spoilers?

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:55 pm

o well when i copied it to word spoiler disappeared, anyways its all good now
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Re: Name: Ray "Flash Thief" Grandaken

Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:26 am

ok i added his first Nen ability, this is not a combat ability, only a stealing ability. criticism welcome.
i will be adding a combat one once i think of one.
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:28 am

you have to list the experiance of nen feilds and list more that just the basics like Kaiser and I did!!!

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:34 am

o right, ok one sec
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:37 am

wait... dont you have any of the non basic techniques, Gyo, Ko, shu, in or en? I thought you needed en for your ability

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:40 am

Well technically he hasnt taught them right? unless i missed something we were still doing the 4 basic ones... ill add that when we get there.
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:41 am

yeah we already went thought them but to be fair you were there to so take a couple

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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:34 am

hello?

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 25, 2009 10:54 am

o i added them sry forgot to say so
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:02 am

he has EVERY technique! and allmost all are advanced! CHEAP!

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:16 am

uhh no he doesnt have ken ko or ryu, ill make gyo poor and shu intermediate
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:18 am

wow I am to frusterated to do anything at the moment, congradualions you have succedded where few have failed

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:30 am

sorry, ill make things less, i just assumed he would be good at En cuz of emission, good at In cuz hes a thief, and good at Shu for his chain...
and since Gyo is pretty much necessary i gave him that too...
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:31 am

yeah I know they can be advanced they just needl a LITTLE more ballance okay?

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Post  Fwink on Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:32 am

well i didnt make him master in anything...
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Post  Admin-sama on Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:34 am

oh crap forgot about that, go ahead and make one of the poors an intermediate and one of the interdatss an advanced

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