Nicolas Pain

View previous topic View next topic Go down

Nicolas Pain

Post  nikz200 on Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:01 pm

Name:Nicholas Pain
Age: 16
Gender:Male

Best physical characteristic: Power and agility
Best Mental characteristic: tactics and observation

Abilities summary ((styles/descriptions and experience levels, beginner, intermediate, advanced, master etc, note that you cant be a master of everything))
Hand to hand:
Weapons:double katana
Non combat:analysis

Techniques list ((specialty moves, make sure to number and give a summary))
Hand to hand:
Weapons:1. dark talon. a swift slice vertically
2. murder of crows. multiple slices aimed at the abdomen and then a leap and jumps up to slice from an unpredictable angle
3. Black wings, A double slice
Non combat:1. Observes enviroment and makes calculations
2. Takes one look at a person and can tell everything about the persons personality


Equipment:His murder book (A book of all contacts and potential targets), his families mirror of communication(Its a phone with a big screen), double blades, ointment for cuts and bruises as well as some cooking utensils(Pots frying pans and all that)
Physical Appearance: ((one paragraph minimum))
A young boy with a light cream skin color, he has jet black hair and is at least 5'1. He wears a White dress shirt inside but outside he wears a black coat in which he uses when he is cold. His weight is also at a medium but he has some well developed muscles which are neither too big nor too small.
Clothing: A black coat with long pants and a white shirt inside his coat, his bag pack onhis back and his double katana on his back as well

Personality:Nikolas is usually a very solemn person and has no problem with butchering mass numbers of people. He often talks about death.However, Nikolas never kills unless he is under a direct request too by his clients, otherwise he would never kill innocent bystanders, however, he will butcher enemies he had been ordered to kill. Nikolas believes only the strong has the right to speak, he prefers the company of women due to the lack of female companionship in his life. He is sadistic while fighting and very dangerous as well
Dislikes:show offs, vegetables , positive people, and as well as people who kill innocents
Outlook: pessimist and oppurtunist

History: Nikolas grew up into one of the most famous yet smallest assassination family's ever. His father was quite a successful assassin along with his uncles and aunt and also his brother. On the mothers side of the family however, they were pretty normal, his mother was a doctor who , while knows about the killing and business, does not question it, simply because she appreciates the traditions. Nikolas wanted to be an assassin, and his father trained him since young . His father trained him to use weapons, think strategically and rationally and also always follow orders and execute with perfection. When Nikolas turned 14 his father decided to place him in the test of acceptance which would finally make him a full member of the family, the test involves Nikolas surviving for one night against all his family members trying to attack and kill him, Nikolas survived barely. Nikolas since then went to two missions, both with success and brutality. Nikolas however was reported to have been completely non discreet in his assassinations, that has caused scolding from his father, his brother on the other hand is a very popular assassin and has been away on travel during most of his life.

The Crows puppets.

Given Nen type: manipulation

Nen fields

Basic Techniques
Ten: 50%
Ren: 30%
Zetsu: 20%

Advanced Techniques ((200% total it is okay to have 0%))

Shu: 30%
En: 40%
In: 10%
Gyo: 20%
Ken: 50%

Hatsu: 50%

Nen Ability: Manipulation, the ability to control another person , the power does not apply to nen users, the use of crow feathers which is to be placed on the victim in order for the nen to travel and allows Nicolas to control them.
Conditions: The feather must be placed on the victims body or clothing.
It does not effect other nen users.
The proximity in which the ability is used cannot be too far apart, the user must be close to the victim.
Secondary nen abilities:
Conditions:

((Note on reinforcement abilities: if you have only reinfocement as your nen type you don't have an "ability" per say but you may use your extra percentages on your nen fields as well as anything non nen based which can be sited under nen ability (example: reinforced vision: +##%) which shows the increase of that attribute))

((Note on multiple types: if you have more than one nen type including reinforcement you may use hatsu, if you have two types that are not reinforcement you must divide your hatsu among those two))


Last edited by nikz200 on Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:34 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : appearance)
avatar
nikz200

Posts : 29
Join date : 2010-06-14

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  Mr Lockin' on Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:05 am

Hmm.....Finding out everything about a character's personality seems like a supernatural "WTF" power, plus it removes most of the things that happen while RPing. Synchronizing thoughts with most anyone also seems a little.....TOO out there.

Actually, for some reason I get the strange feeling this is almost entirely an existing character from something.

_________________
Come deeper, deeper, into the forest. We've got delights so good you won't believe your eyes. Deeper, deeper, you'll find lots of treasure; but just be careful, or you'll wake the wolves. Darkness, grimace, candy and treats, you won't be leaving, so stay here and eat.
avatar
Mr Lockin'

Posts : 193
Join date : 2008-09-28
Age : 24
Location : Playing with Cards that have Godly Powers...Why'd you ask?

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  Admin-sama on Tue Jun 15, 2010 4:01 am

agreed, he basically has telepathy with out nen which we have rules against, also his equipment need to be explained

_________________
My Characters

One Piece RP => http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/index.htm
avatar
Admin-sama

Posts : 1360
Join date : 2008-08-29
Age : 25
Location : Im here unless Im not

View user profile http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/forum.htm

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  nikz200 on Tue Jun 15, 2010 9:22 am

ok i have editted the whole thing
avatar
nikz200

Posts : 29
Join date : 2010-06-14

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  Admin-sama on Tue Jun 15, 2010 10:52 am

Knowing every aspect of a person personality from looking at the is basicaly telepathy... Since none of the items he has are abnormal that's fine but he will need a three line phisical apperance description

_________________
My Characters

One Piece RP => http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/index.htm
avatar
Admin-sama

Posts : 1360
Join date : 2008-08-29
Age : 25
Location : Im here unless Im not

View user profile http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/forum.htm

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  nikz200 on Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:08 pm

actually, he will be able to tell about the persons habits , tendencies and behavior patterns, not a direct telepathy, its some thing sherlock holmes has, based on observation.
avatar
nikz200

Posts : 29
Join date : 2010-06-14

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  Mr Lockin' on Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:42 am

Isn't that what RPing interactions is for? =_=

_________________
Come deeper, deeper, into the forest. We've got delights so good you won't believe your eyes. Deeper, deeper, you'll find lots of treasure; but just be careful, or you'll wake the wolves. Darkness, grimace, candy and treats, you won't be leaving, so stay here and eat.
avatar
Mr Lockin'

Posts : 193
Join date : 2008-09-28
Age : 24
Location : Playing with Cards that have Godly Powers...Why'd you ask?

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  Admin-sama on Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:04 am

so hes like a detective, all-right but you'll have to show his train of thought when he uses this

APPROVED

_________________
My Characters

One Piece RP => http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/index.htm
avatar
Admin-sama

Posts : 1360
Join date : 2008-08-29
Age : 25
Location : Im here unless Im not

View user profile http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/forum.htm

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  nikz200 on Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:24 am

The Crows puppets.

Given Nen type: manipulation

Nen fields

Basic Techniques
Ten: 50%
Ren: 30%
Zetsu: 20%

Advanced Techniques ((200% total it is okay to have 0%))

Shu: 30%
En: 40%
In: 10%
Gyo: 20%
Ken: 50%

Hatsu: 50%

Nen Ability: Manipulation, the ability to control another person , the power does not apply to nen users, the use of crow feathers which is to be placed on the victim in order for the nen to travel and allows Nicolas to control them.
Conditions: The feather must be placed on the victims body or clothing.
It does not effect other nen users.
The proximity in which the ability is used cannot be too far apart, the user must be close to the victim.
Secondary nen abilities:
Conditions:

((Note on reinforcement abilities: if you have only reinfocement as your nen type you don't have an "ability" per say but you may use your extra percentages on your nen fields as well as anything non nen based which can be sited under nen ability (example: reinforced vision: +##%) which shows the increase of that attribute))

((Note on multiple types: if you have more than one nen type including reinforcement you may use hatsu, if you have two types that are not reinforcement you must divide your hatsu among those two))


Last edited by nikz200 on Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:33 am; edited 1 time in total
avatar
nikz200

Posts : 29
Join date : 2010-06-14

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  Admin-sama on Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:30 am

include that to the first post please

_________________
My Characters

One Piece RP => http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/index.htm
avatar
Admin-sama

Posts : 1360
Join date : 2008-08-29
Age : 25
Location : Im here unless Im not

View user profile http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/forum.htm

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  nikz200 on Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:35 am

done, i dont get to choose my second type till i get more experience right?
avatar
nikz200

Posts : 29
Join date : 2010-06-14

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  Admin-sama on Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:38 am

APPROVED

_________________
My Characters

One Piece RP => http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/index.htm
avatar
Admin-sama

Posts : 1360
Join date : 2008-08-29
Age : 25
Location : Im here unless Im not

View user profile http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/forum.htm

Back to top Go down

Re: Nicolas Pain

Post  Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum